Difficulty: Easy
Correct Answer: were more influenced by Indian philosophy, in particular by Upanishadic Philosophy.
Explanation:
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Concept / Approach
Use a comparator only when comparison is explicit (‘‘more … than …’’). Without a ‘‘than’’-phrase, use an intensifier such as ‘‘greatly/strongly/profoundly influenced’’. Also, names of fields are not capitalized unless proper nouns → ‘‘Upanishadic philosophy’’ (‘‘Upanishad’’ is capitalized when the text is meant, but the field descriptor takes lower-case ‘‘philosophy’’).
Step-by-step correction reasoning
Step 1: Replace ‘‘more influenced’’ → ‘‘greatly influenced’’ (or ‘‘profoundly influenced’’).Step 2: Write the discipline phrase as ‘‘Upanishadic philosophy’’.
Corrected version
‘‘… who lived in the latter half of the nineteenth century, were greatly influenced by Indian philosophy, in particular by Upanishadic philosophy.’’
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Final Answer
were more influenced by Indian philosophy, in particular by Upanishadic Philosophy.
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